Monday, September 22, 2014

Week 5A

Today in class we critiqued our final icons. The feedback that I got on my icon was:

  • the dimensions on the final icon work really well
  • the message comes across strong and works well
  • changing the color of the wireframe on the phone was a good idea because my original idea (two shades of blue) was too similar to each other
Areas that I could improve:
  • make the phone screen look more reflective
  • put the flipped corner of the paper on the side that touches the phone screen to show it peeling away from the phone
  • possibly make the flipped corner bigger because it gets a little lost when scaled down

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